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family tree
Contributed by
systematiq
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Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:05:18 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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the sun that shines affects the whole tree
blood is thicker than water ,
the rain drops affect the entire tree
a fire can destroy the tree
but it will remain tarnished depending on the strength of its roots
my tree cannot be destryoed
its seen so many storms and it still stands
some of the branches have fallen but new branches sprout
love and caring thats what its all about
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2005-11-08 13:05:18]
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Re: family tree
(User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:13:26 PM AEST
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| thats a cool poem about how ya' put meanings about family and keeping together no matter what happens in your life with family |
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Re: family tree
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:11:15 PM AEST
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This is far better than "renegade"
I like your style in this and your determination to stay close to your family. That is how life is- Family is the refuge from an often hostile world. In real life trees do very often survive forest fires and the damage that comes through trouble can be repaired through nourishment. You have a lot to offer as a writer and many lessons to teach, especially when you write like this. 5 stars |
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