|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Phone Call
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 08:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
The phone had a message blinking
She thought Just another Call
The voice of that far away Lighthouse
Now only shadows and forbidden
has risen.
She swore never
will it be
spoken of again
The familar sound of that tang
That gentle boyish charm
How her Heart has ached
She could hardly speak.
Hard was her heart racing
Thinking about those tortured
forgotten shadows again.
But this was not forever
Of this she well knew .
But oh how Wonderful
To feel the blood begin to flow within
Like a healing power
with just the power of his voice.
Two of a kind by
Satans Command
What felt like forever
had left her dead inside
Then with just one Phone Call
She was born again.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
... [
2005-11-07 20:48:44]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:10:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow this is a really deep poem and very awesome.
Take care.
Scott |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:30:47 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Woah, powerful and emotional, yet so simple at the same time. Very very good.
~ Riisa |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zanobia on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:33:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow deep. it was really deep. continue writing
zanobia |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:37:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great write-
Love has a way of making someone lost feel
found and has a way of stiring things up that have been dorment for so long a time-
All it takes is a whisper of air or a gentle sound to remind us of a better and more senuious time...
Take care
Joe |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:23:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| good write I loved this,,Eddy |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th January 2006 @ 03:24:55 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Such a suspenseful write! It made me want to keep reading! Nice work! |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 02:20:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Aint it amazing how something like this can bring back all those lost memories.
I wanna know, did they come back before or after listening to the message, the poem dont say.
This was a great write, I coulndt wait to get to the end, and when I got there, I didnt want it to end
Loved it
Ash~ |
|
|
Re: The Phone Call
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I've known those moments of anxiously waiting for that certain phone call and you did a great job at conveying it.
Thanks
Tim
 |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
