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I Am So Mean
Contributed by
jbevan
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Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 04:39:33 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I am a very mean person and can get my own way.
Believe me i can take you down anyday
I can hurt,say and be very mean
Im the worst ***** you have ever seen
I will make your life hell if you get in my way
As i said i can take you down right here today
And it will be my own way
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jbevan
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2005-11-07 16:39:33]
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Re: I Am So Mean
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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how very cute all the best smiles and bunnies
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Re: I Am So Mean
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:26:27 PM AEST
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| well now that you have the realization, what will you do with it? i for one just stayed the same with small modifications of who and why i would use my meanness. as for the poem, there wasnt anything spectacular about it. i dont like how it repeats so much for such a short poem or breaks a format of rhyme scheme. i think it was short and to the point, and has anger behind it. i do think there needs to be more of you in it to set your anger apart from others though, poetry wise. afterall, everyone has anger, what makes yours so special to read about? that would be a good question to ask if you care to revise this. |
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