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What Happened
Contributed by
Ranchan
on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:38:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I try and try to bring you close to me,
In result you end up in misery.
Erase me from the picture for life to be simple,
I can’t say that I owe you nor we’re equal.
Fifty percent is half, that’s too much in size,
It’s difficult and painful in my eyes.
You love me, but there’s part for another man,
Sadly I accepted and soon I was banned.
My thoughts are different from now on,
Every time there’s a mess I walk away from the bond.
I’m tired and annoyed.
My patients is leaving and so is my voice.
Keep up the good work its fine and swell,
I can see I no longer bring happiness to your emotions well.
Think before we speak,
Mistake every one makes even the ones on top of the peak.
I disagree with lots and unhappy with much,
I can go on and on for such.
You may explain, but I’ll never understand,
Want to continue then lend out a hand.
There’s things I don’t want to do for this,
But of course one of us must be pleased………
Copyright ©
Ranchan
... [
2005-11-07 13:38:00]
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Re: What Happened
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by JenJen on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 02:29:53 PM AEST
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| wow really good keep it up |
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Re: What Happened
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by lostrelic on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 03:23:34 PM AEST
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lovely flow and great imagery
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