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Persuasive Eyes

Contributed by BloodsEcho on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 12:59:30 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Deeply entwined, within thou grasp
Pricked ears, and high senses
To catch the feminen fragrance, as she gasps
Thou have caused thee, intentional pain
It seems as I’ve lost faith, like a dead rose
Drowning in the stinging, black rain
Her whispers have eaten, away at my soul
Enchained to her hands, my heart she once stole
Sunlight upon nightfall, and twilight upon dawn
White feathers upon crow, black feathers upon swan
Her voice is like thunder, her whispers like rain
Her eyes tell the story, of a suicidal pain
Her touch is electrical, forming mistrust
Little by little, I’ve created an abomination of lust
Her once pure soul, has rotted to nothing but decay
The day she left thee, shall be the darkest of thou day
The dark gates have opened, ever since my birth
I’ve felt her shiver, as angels breath wind upon thee earth
My once confused desires, she cast upon salted fires
Deaf as I once was, my words have taught liars
As my blood continues churning, the darkness keeps burning
And as the ocean hold thee tide, I am forever held my her persuasive eyes

Copyright Â© BloodsEcho ... [ 2005-11-07 12:59:30]
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