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Meaning
Contributed by
tiggytom
on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Over you I have become so underdone
Fingers been burnt at the expense of the one
One for me which is plain to see
The only time I’ll ever have thee
To realise when its here that you no longer fear
The power of one is so much stronger then none
The silent voice speaks loudest amongst the empty room
Acknowledged by no one the voice fades to the sun
Solitary soldier hidden amidst the masses
Tries to enlighten, to promote the hassles
Faced by our fellow warriors
The fight through the war of life
Only allowed to travel so far
Allowed to speak only in tongues
Hidden inside the clever son, of the mother
Nurtured from a young age, becoming just another.
Change is imminent it will come
Even so much quicker will it burn and be done
Becoming just another trend like that of your friends
Selfish thoughts they tend to figure in my plans
Individual wants and needs is half the battle faced by man
One whole vision, one migration
To the place we’ve forgotton through ignorance
Once before we were there, where, oh where?
Originating from a female clone
Shown the basics, of where to call home
Learning as you will entirely on your own
How the life of one will breed only a clone.
Much too late will we all relate
To our inner self at the entry gate
Everything will have been stolen
All the knowledge we’re supposed to contain
Finally revealed will be the real.
Time to configure your walk to a crawl.
Now its time to learn how to feel.
Copyright ©
tiggytom
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2005-11-07 10:09:57]
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Re: Meaning
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 03:59:44 PM AEST
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A real thought provoking write you have presented us with Tom. So much truth behind your words. There's alot of meaning to your writes. You are a very clever/talented writer. Keep up the great work.
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Re: Meaning
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 05:48:15 AM AEST
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I loved your first line. It grabbed me and made me read on.
Nice one
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Re: Meaning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 07:00:49 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem. very thought_provoking! |
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