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Sleeping With The Memory
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Fresh from a bath of rose oil,she wanders to her room
To brush her hair before the mirror and dab on some perfume
Candlelight is flickering across her saddened face
While a fragrant breeze kisses soft,her neglige of lace
Behind her near the bed,she sees his photo in a frame
And she makes her way across to him,whispering his name
Falling on the bed with his face held in her hands
Shedding tears so freely,for the heart that holds this man
The summer breeze so tender,drifts across her still damp flesh
Reminding her of moments when his lips had touched her breast
He never felt the love within,her deepest feelings were alone
Still she loved him faithfully,as though she was his own
Reaching out through shadows,to return his photo to it's place
She pauses and decides that here in bed with her he'll stay
Just for one more night,so while she sleeps,she has him near
For letting go of him isn't easy,the truth is hard to hear
With closed eyes remembering,a time when hope was young
Now tears replace the stars at night,because all hope is gone
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-01-22 05:20:00]
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:05:01 AM AEST
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My god, It is terrific..how photographic..
wonderful..You have won my appreciation...
keep them coming on. Venkat |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:30:43 PM AEST
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| Love this poem also ... beautifully written. |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:50:38 PM AEST
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| sigh......it's writes like this that make you my poetic idol. Larry :o) |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:34:41 PM AEST
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Another beautifully written piece. Thank you so much for sharing.
rosie |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:31:54 AM AEST
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wow...there is only one word for this poem and thats beautiful....
Lasca |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Trisha on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 11:28:43 AM AEST
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| Hey Girl. What's up? I do like this and keep up the good work. |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 10:56:02 PM AEST
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| This is absolutely great. Loved it. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Merry on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:54:13 PM AEST
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this is very sad and beautilly written- you really set the mood and follow it through from beginning to end.
merry |
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Re: Sleeping With The Memory
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 12:39:41 AM AEST
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You have a great descriptive talent. I can see her, I can see his pic in your words and I can feel the emotion flowing from your gifted heart.
Thank you...really..thank you for writing.
Tim |
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