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My Silence
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There is a thing that you know
Of which we don’t speak
When strain starts to show
My silence I keep
I wish I could say
What it is that I feel
But this game I must play
Or my fate I could seal
Which scares you more
Its existence or lack?
What’s at the heart’s core,
Needs be mirrored back
For the day, I still hope
When the curtain shall fall
When you’ll choose not to mope
But return my heart’s call
I miss so much
The times when we’re close
Without your soul’s touch
I feel sullen, morose
Each day is a struggle
To see good beyond you
It is well worth the trouble
And keeps me from blue
My blessings have been great
And I keep them in mind
I must weather the wait
For your heart to unbind
A fool’s play it may be
But it’s a risk I must take
For your heart, I must query
Or mine, I’ll forsake
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-11-06 23:01:42]
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Re: My Silence
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:33:12 PM AEST
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| i like your use of words. good write. |
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Re: My Silence
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by Faddy on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:00:09 AM AEST
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| loved it, your use of words was awesome and the simple wording of it. you made what could have been an awful poem pretty much awesome, so awesome |
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Re: My Silence
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by Whisper on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:34:33 AM AEST
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Nice write. Thanks for sharing.
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