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what would become if the universe was twisted
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:44:12 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Gazing out the window of a well dirven route
Thoughts ponder through my head
wondering if life would have been different
If we had been cursed with happiness instead?
Would I be anything of who I am today?
Would I be somebody I would hate?
Insensitive, irrational just to many to say
So all in all, I'm glad of who and what I am
You can say anything about me
Because frankly I dont give a dam
Kate Ecklund
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Re: what would become if the universe was twisted
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by christsfollower on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:12:37 PM AEST
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Good poem. It shows that you're resolved in your independence. But there is one thing... no matter how abandoned you feel, god is always there as well. I liked the poem, keep em coming.
~~isaiah |
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Re: what would become if the universe was twisted
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by Rose on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:12:42 AM AEST
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| You show your independant spirit of freedom of who you are. No matter how you feel, we all have responsibility of what we do and say in our actions. seeing this write, indicates you can face your daily grind of life and still move on and do other things. Good write. Others can critize you, but most times we are our own worst critics. AMber Rose Yeager :) |
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Re: what would become if the universe was twisted
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by sride686 on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:07:58 AM AEST
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Well Kate its been a few sense I’ve
talk to you but this is a good write and
you haven’t lost your touch. Be
yourself for everyone else is taken
and this write says it all and I’m glad
you see that. The good and the bad
make you who you are and you are a
beautiful person because you are the
only you. Take care and sorry if my
comment sounds sappy. Take care
girl and glad to see your doing
okay….Steve |
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