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To The End
Contributed by
fredsmith
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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To The End
Can’t you understand,
There’s no other way.
It was his command,
No more to say.
It’s to late,
I’m already dead.
Just call it fate,
From what I said.
Suicide is what I chose,
From the scars inside.
My body he can dispose,
My heart has died.
Please dig my grave,
Burry me deep.
Before it will enslave,
And all will weep.
I must die,
There’s too much pain.
Please don’t cry,
I’m going insane
An angel will land,
Only to laugh at me.
My soul he will demand,
I’m going to hell cant you see.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
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2005-11-06 17:36:03]
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Re: To The End
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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hey man, depressions a ***** hey. I know i have been suffering from it for 14 years. Come to see that scew everyone else, be selfish do it all for yourself. Hey maybe i've finally gone insane, and im leading myself to a huge downfall. Maybe but at least im happy for now. try it.i wanna let you know. nobody gives a ***** about eachother, you gotta give a ***** about yourself. take care, good write.
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Re: To The End
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by tears_of_blood on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:25:35 AM AEST
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| really strong words that you used makes me feel some pain that you may feel iv felt that way befor one day youll find someone that well take it all away just stay strong good poem. |
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Re: To The End
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by mrpeanut64 on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:17:05 PM AEST
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| Sometimes you can feel so down that even death looks like a better solution, but always remember while there is life there is HOPE. With death there is only death |
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