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To be free
Contributed by
mindset
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:21:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Every day an upward cloud
Birds so free floating high
Gliding on a pure answer
Feeling that only breeze
It's the answer our total begin
Earth bound we dont know our sin
Pale faces so many so far
LIfe for them splintered fingers
Every breath a lonely exhale
Yet deep down a voice of real
Keeps us going to find our heal
Sometimes we dream a heaven blue
Only to awake standing at that door
Left to wish of all before
It is our invite to see all within
A place we all forgot to begin
My hope is that something awaits
And life is our place our starting gates
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mindset
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2005-11-06 14:21:55]
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Re: To be free
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by justinblue on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:37:33 PM AEST
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great write..........i love it
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Re: To be free
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:39:03 PM AEST
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wonderful- and your comment on mine was a thousand times better than my poem- loved it
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