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faster,faster..(you never loved me..for me.)
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:58:13 PM in AEST
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oops
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Violet and gray
It's easy to say
you're the reason my heart beats
faster!
Ugly duckling I'll stay
No, it won't go away
A disfigured reflection
An incomplete perfection
And my minds racing
Faster! Faster!
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emocutie07
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2005-11-06 13:58:13]
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Re: faster,faster..(you never loved me..for me.)
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by justinblue on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:50:52 PM AEST
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| i feel you have a great start but needs another verse, as you already know |
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Re: faster,faster..(you never loved me..for me.)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:55:03 PM AEST
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Like you said it's not finished, but I feel with a bit more your poem will be absolutely awesome. Keep at it and goodluck. Can't wait to read it when it's finished.
*hugs*
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