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Why Me
Contributed by
memories_mist
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:31:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why is it me that you make so mad
a day started good, just got bad
You hide things from me
but I can see
The truth hurts when not given right
dont do this to me again another night
Play with my heart, then tear at it with a knife,
who makes you judge and jury of my life
I will stand strong and not back down
you smile at me, I will frown
Goin to take these words and use them against you
make your empty promises come true
Tonite I start to live again, you will not be my
friend,
Then you will be the one to say Why me? again.
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memories_mist
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2005-11-06 08:31:45]
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Re: Why Me
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:41:16 AM AEST
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wow a very strong emotional poem...if you ask me i think you should get out of this relationship if its getting that bad...all the luck in the world
Luv
Jenni
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Re: Why Me
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:53:30 AM AEST
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| Wowie very good i love the emotion and rhyming WELL DONE EXCELLENT! |
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Re: Why Me
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:34:46 AM AEST
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| enjoyed your poem why oh why lol |
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Re: Why Me
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:00:39 AM AEST
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Wow intense emotion!
Hmmm if things are this bad then it is best to walk away from it... this poem is wrote in such a talented way that it flows even though it is very angry! i really enjoyed reading it
luv
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Re: Why Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry filled with anger and emotion. A relationship like that is not healthy. I suggest you leave and start afresh. I love your style of writing, keep up the great work. Good luck and may you see brighter days ahead.
*hugs*
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