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Should have killed me when you had the chance
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 07:47:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So I say goodbye to a town that has ears and eyes
I can hear you whispering as I walk by
Familiar faces smiling back at me and I knew
This would make them change
The only thing that's going to bother me
Is that you'll all call yourselves my friends
Why can't you look me in the eyes one last time?
The writings on the wall, you've read that I'll be gone, but if you call my name
Just know that I'll come running, for one more night to spare with you
This is where I'm meant to be, please don't leave me
I’ve read these stories a thousand times, and now I’ll rewrite them all
You’re meddling in an anger you can’t control
She means the world to me, so hold your serpent tongue
Are your lies worth dying for? I'll just take my time
I walked into your house this morning
I brought the gun from our end table
Your blood was strewn across the walls
They'll find you on your bathroom floor when I'm done
But should I write it all off?
You should have killed me when you had the chance!
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Re: Should have killed me when you had the chance
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by memories_mist on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:07:45 AM AEST
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| Ummmmmm, can i say WOW, and that photo added a great finishing touch...WOW!!!! |
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Re: Should have killed me when you had the chance
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:46:08 AM AEST
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wow....amazing write well done keep it up
ever need a chat you can come to me
jen
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Re: Should have killed me when you had the chance
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:05:17 AM AEST
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I was really gripped by this poem... but i felt there should have been more for some reason...im not criticising it because it is an amazing piece of work wrote by someone with obvious talent...i really loved the picture at the end as well...
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Re: Should have killed me when you had the chance
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by MajesticPoet on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:21:57 PM AEST
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| Thank you all for your comments. For those that read this after and want to see the picture, please send a private email from this site and I will email you back the link. I was not aware that you had to be a premium member to post pics. I do apologize for that... Thank you all that had read the poem. I appreciate you comments. You are all amazing people and am glad to know I have a place to vent my feelings and get honest feedback.. |
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