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Look Upon The Past
Contributed by
Kuro_Mirai
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:29:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look upon your past
What do see?
Happiness?
Sadness?
Pain?
I see a different view of things.
A different point of view.
Things are not just a pain.
They're strange, fun, and new.
I see things in a different light.
Nothing's too horrible to keep me down.
I'm naive, I don't think much about things.
Like the person I am now might.
I see the people around me.
Some are happy, some are sad.
I smile for sad people because I want them to be happy.
I just wanted to be happy.
It all seems like a dream now.
Where has my life gone?
Why have all the people I loved become sad?
Why am I sad?
Why can't things be the way they were?
Will someone smile for me? To make me happy?
I want to be happy again.
Copyright ©
Kuro_Mirai
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Re: Look Upon The Past
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:23:30 AM AEST
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| hey good stuff i like your style, nice workx |
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Re: Look Upon The Past
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:55:45 PM AEST
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Poems don't need to rhyme, and as long as you like it it's all that matters. I could tell there was a lot of emotion in this, it really was a pleasure reading, thanks for posting, and great write, hope to see more soon.
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Re: Look Upon The Past
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:37:29 PM AEST
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oh the past...
what a mangled heap of missed happening
and near-deaths :) |
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Re: Look Upon The Past
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by Drmbeliever on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:46:32 AM AEST
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| very interesting......i was a bit confused, but i think i figured it all out. |
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