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Fingers Icy Cold Touching me
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:34:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cold freezing feet and cold bent chilly hands
caress this restless soul
The Creeper visits and occupies my mind
He reaches in and plays on the weakest part of this
weak mortal soul I so cleverly command
Its icy talons like a vice
squeezing my engorged heart
Pressure unbareable
Yet not unpleasureable
The devils work I say
A curse for the life I have earned
Running from the lies and
truth in the dark as well as the Light
Falling , Stumbling, Falling
Over and Over again
Your guts ache
and the muscles in the neck so hard
that its like cement
A heavy weight on your shoulders
Crushing your whole being
every day
So hard to continue
Under this charade
Feel my fight fading
Do I deserve this
Is it a black magic curse
Is there no where to turn.
Should I cut or hang and just be
gone
Gone
Thoughts who needs these
There are Fingers , icy cold touching me,
Their grip enough to chill the bone
Has got me once again
Whisper
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Whisper
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Re: Fingers Icy Cold Touching me
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 07:38:27 AM AEST
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A different write but it really dose
show your darker bone chilling
thoughts that move throughout
your mind. Well done and it was
a little different in the structure, I
liked it. Take care and keep up
the writes….Steve |
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Re: Fingers Icy Cold Touching me
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:06:02 AM AEST
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| i do like this, dark troubled enjoy this style |
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Re: Fingers Icy Cold Touching me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:32:25 PM AEST
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A chilling dark very well written piece of poetry. I love the way you've presented this. Captivating and gripping. You keep your reader captivated from start to finish . Well done.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Fingers Icy Cold Touching me
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:13:34 PM AEST
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I loved this dark and chilling poem for it's teminology! I could feel the feelings you were trying to convey.....................Very good Whisper.............Have a wonderfully Chilly Day BrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrSmiles
Warm love
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