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Shadows Come on Back
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:50:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Alone ,in the quiet and dreaming
Clasping my shaking hands to my head
I hear our laughter echoing
filling the quiet sweet cool air
AM I just wishing it
Some things last as
Thrilling forever
Shadows Come on back
As I go walking and watch the things
we might have had if we were There
in the branches of empty trees.
There is a lonely lantern forever burning
for those shadows I dare never Whisper
Me , you and the shadows
Built of sadness .
There
forever just never mentioned.
Shadows built on sadness
No one will Understand.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-11-06 00:50:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Shadows Come on Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by tiggytom on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:12:00 AM AEST (User
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I think this is the second piece i've read of yours i like your stuff keep it upx |
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Re: Shadows Come on Back
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:52:42 AM AEST (User
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A deep, sad and emotional write. No one will understand unless they have been through it too. May the days ahead be alot brighter for you.
*heartfelt hugs from me to u*
sue |
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