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innocent one
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 10:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She’s overwhelmed with emotion
Her tears start to fall
The fear is deep inside her
Eating away her hope
The innocent one is gone
She was thrown into the dark
As the shadows of the past
Take her from us all
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-11-05 22:58:54]
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Re: innocent one
(User Rating: 1 )
by hopefades on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 03:53:05 AM AEST
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i really like it
lots of love |
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Re: innocent one
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by memories_mist on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:54:31 PM AEST
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| Hmmm..i like this..so little says so so MUCH. |
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Re: innocent one
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:17:37 PM AEST
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Well, of course it is very sad but it is an impressive write. Emotion is a big part of writing and you express yourself very well.
I agree little said says a lot!
Very good Jennifer, keep them coming and thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: innocent one
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:20:23 PM AEST
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| P.S. Your avatar is really cool! :-) |
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