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Shadows Of A Dream
Contributed by
candysears
on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:39:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I sit here in the evening late,
Watching the golden sun
Descending behind the moon
Light,
Casting shadows of love lost
Wishing for the years gone by
Living in the past..
Daydreaming of what once was
But now all an illusion of a
Dream,
Shadows continue to gape upon
Me,
An illusion of all beautiful things
Is all that just a memory?
Whizzing through my mind leaving
Memories of your touch
To never be felt again
Only shadows and dreams of what
Once was..
I sit here in the evening late,
Watching the golden sun
Descending behind the moon
Light,
Wishing I could hold you once
Again,
Copyright ©
candysears
... [
2005-11-05 20:39:07]
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by Zanobia on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 10:42:20 PM AEST
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| wow. that was really good, i give it a 9.5 out of 10. |
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:30:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Very nice write. Warm and smooth flowing. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:28:38 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful i loved reading it a poem of true artistry warm and heartfelt, very nice very nice indeed . . .
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by travisk on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:54:10 AM AEST
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| good stuff |
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by travisk on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 05:36:07 AM AEST
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| very well done, good imagery. |
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Re: Shadows Of A Dream
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by Loende on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 02:58:43 AM AEST
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A bitter-sweet dream indeed. Sometimes we really can get locked up in the past. I really liked this, thank you.
Be well,
Loende |
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