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The Porcelain Mask...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
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Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:28:04 PM in AEST
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Won’t you end my torment
Please give me what I ask
I see the smile your hiding
Behind the porcelain mask
Fulfil my empty heart
With love that's good and true
I had it once, then I lost it
Till the day that I found you
My heart has sanctioned its pain
Every chamber an opened door
The blood that rushes within
Will feel love again once more
Fervent desires linger
Heated passion ignites in trice
I'll be here contented waiting
For the fall of your dice
I vow to love you staunchly
In return, I ask is the same
No more poignant excuses
Matters of the heart are no game
So won’t you end my torment
Take off the porcelain mask
My heart it needs an answer
To the questions that I ask
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by DreamPoetess on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 10:35:23 PM AEST
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| a smile hiding, empty heart, its terrible:> torment is right:> |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:37:08 PM AEST
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The old heart goes out to ya
Thanks fer sharing
Whisper |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:20:14 AM AEST
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| loved this when I first saw it Sue and I still love it. yoiu are such a good writer ans a even better person,,,hugs to you from across the blue,,,Eddy |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by Crimsonflame on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:49:12 AM AEST
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| aww.that's so sweet..........it's hard when u cant read someone and yet when u finally get to see the person behind the mask,it will all be worth it......I love this poem,keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by brew on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:25:41 AM AEST
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Seems many hide behind, something..........be it with a smile, or with a frown.! Even if it is with out a mask.......many still hide.! Loved the style of the WHOLE write..........made you ponder on realism.! Always a pleasure, to read a post of yours.! You have a lot of talent.
Brew~ |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 03:27:45 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I know all men aren't the same, but sometimes it sure seems so...When I come across a write such as this, and it reminds me 100% of who broke my heart! Grrrrrr. I think there's a couple big-ish obstacles for you two to overcome first, but I honestly think you and he could pull it off, and find true love and happiness together Sue...You laid your cards out in this one, and now he needs to respond. Very well done. Your expression in this piece is deep.
((((((((((((((((((((Sue)))))))))))))))))))))
Scorp.
(Who seems to be on a roll with the hugs today!) |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by ChibiMiroku on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:13:54 PM AEST
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Matters of the heart are no game.....
How true. I don't think that there are many people who can write emotional poetry as well as you....
Great write!
Vincent |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 10:33:37 PM AEST
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such a beautiful write sue, the heart of innocence 2gether with the skill of an angels hand, splendid in every way, beautiful my friend . . .
(((((((((((((Sue))))))))))))))
Ben |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:05:43 AM AEST
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This is very well written, and a plaintive cry that appears to be deeply felt... I pray it was answered.
Em |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful poem, it's really awesome.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 03:41:20 PM AEST
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| Try to recall all those happy times, let them fill your spirit, then begin there. Yes, when people hide, many others are cut off, but just remember to be yourself, the problem does not lie within you, let the other person become responsible for their actions, you will never be able to change up another soul, therefore, you must try to get out of the situation where in which it is dragging you down. Smile Sue, be happy, love from me, your friend, Raquel Leah :D true loving words, follow those words in action equals happiness and peace... |
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Re: The Porcelain Mask...
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 03:20:29 PM AEST
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well done
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