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Nature
Contributed by
shortcut
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Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:19:49 PM in AEST
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Nature
Light shattered around us,
Thus as we go on,
We were being followed,
By a baby fawn.
Leaves fell,
The ocean swished and splashed,
It has been such a long walk that we had pumped cells.
All as we heard the new church bells .
We ran and ran as fast as we could.
We kicked sticks and tripped on rocks,
Our faces were sweaty,
When we got to the church we were studying about wood.
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Re: Nature
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 05:23:45 AM AEST
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Aw !
This is a wonderous sweet poem from the eyes of a child.
I gave her a four rating,but should have given her a five.
For an eight year old she has good insite for potery.
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Re: Nature
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 05:24:56 AM AEST
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Aw !
This is a wonderous sweet poem from the eyes of a child.
I gave her a four rating,but should have given her a five.
For an eight year old she has good insite for poetry.
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