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Ghostly Whispers
Contributed by
kiss4roq
on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:40:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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In the sky, there is no light,
nothing to see, not a person in sight.
Shadows whisper softly to me,
shadows of people I can barely see.
I run for my life from these ghostly sounds,
hoping the sound will drown from soles meeting ground.
Sense failing as my mind races on,
running from something that is already gone.
My eyes glaze over, but I'm still running forth,
these voices I'm hearing feel no remorse.
"Keep on going" my mind tells me so,
Even though the voices are low.
Legs tiring as I sprint through the door,
laying lifeless, half dead on the floor.
Voices now screaming, making me stress,
voices now screaming a little less.
Body vibrating as I crawl into bed,
now wishing I was more than almost half dead.
Another nightmare, another dream,
reality is worthless, or so it may seem.
(the one and only *Kristena*)
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kiss4roq
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2005-11-05 12:40:06]
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Re: Ghostly Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:52:43 PM AEST
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Very nice, good rhythme.
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Re: Ghostly Whispers
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:48:15 PM AEST
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Nice write Kristena. Bravo Thanks for sharing
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Re: Ghostly Whispers
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:16:39 AM AEST
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Wow! What a frightening experience. Your poems are so vivid - I can see it all happening. Keep that creative ink flowing.
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Re: Ghostly Whispers
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by Kayden on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 03:28:44 PM AEST
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| Great job... Your rhymeing is incredible... I love it... Gosh, you really paint the picture of whats happening in the readers mind... Its awesome... please, keep wrighting |
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