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Separated Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:03:13 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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A warm soft feeling
Tears swell in my eyes
Hurt in my heart
As I start to cry
Tears of joy
That are unleashed
With tears of love
My hates defeat
A perfect love
For my perfect wife
Apart from her
I feel my strife
I hide my hurt
And hide my pain
But my love for her
Calls out her name
I wake from my dreams
In the middle of night
I reach for my love
But she’s know were in sight
I lay awake
And I see her face
I’m lost to my love
Alone in this place
Now I count the days
Till we’re together as one
And all I know
Is my love she has won
~Steve~
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sride686
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2005-11-05 08:03:13]
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Re: Separated Love
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by moon_light on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 08:13:20 AM AEST
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butifull the joy of true love.
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Re: Separated Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 09:21:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but soothing.
May u 2 be united once again really soon.
God keep u-n-your family safe.
huggs, thanks, praye, best wishes,
emy |
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Re: Separated Love
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by Poetic_Influence on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:59:41 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Separated Love
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 04:27:20 PM AEST
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aww... hang in there, steve. just a little bit until she's in your arms again.
and yet again, my friend, a great write just based on your love. very well done. i enjoyed reading this and i wish you could be holding her right now. i hate knowing that you are in pain. but, writing helps and you do good at it so, hand in there, my friend and keep on writing!!!
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Re: Separated Love
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by assassinatorgirl on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:35:50 PM AEST
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| Fantastic poem, keep up the good work. Your wife is lucky to have you, I hope you two are very happy together forever. |
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Re: Separated Love
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by LolaWhite on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:49:38 PM AEST
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Although I love all of your writes the ones I enjoy the most are those of your love for me! Even when it hurts to love me you still do and I thank you for loving me and sharing that with the world. I love the beauty of this write, I can feel your love in every line, but I also feel your pain, your want to be with me and your need to be back with me in order to feel safe and loved completely. I love you and your writes are amazing...I definantly see an incredible improvement in these last few writes over some of your first ones. Thank you for sharing this.
xoxoxox
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