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Letter to the one i love

Contributed by Punkified_freak on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 06:10:26 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I have asked of you too much
I have asked of you and you’ve been here
You have listened to my ramblings and all my complaints
You have helped me through the worst times
Spoke about the rest
But now I’m in over my head
And everything’s too much
Just waking up, seems to be too tough
Now I need you to do one more favour
That is all I’ll ever need
I am begging with my heart wide open
I hate having to ask this of you ,once more
I really thought I was over it, and I promised you I was
But the thing is, I just can’t live with it anymore
You know what is going on
And now my hands are shaking, and my speaking getting slurred
God why can’t I ask you,
But I don’t want to be a burden so goodbye to you
Just so you know I love you so ***** much
It’s tearing out my heart
Just goodbye, and sorry for all the pain I’ve caused,
I don’t want to cause anymore

Copyright Â© Punkified_freak ... [ 2005-11-05 06:10:26]
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Re: Letter to the one i love (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:00:20 PM AEST
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cute

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