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Anger, Blood, Tears
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
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Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:30:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Anger flows through my veins
Blood rushing in my ears
My frustration grows
Holding me back like chains
My hands start to tremble
As I feel like I'm about to explode
I can't deal with this right now
The blood running through me flowed
Tears start a line down my face
Hands curl into fists
My mind starts race
My breathing quickens
The wallsstart to closeinon me
allaround,suffocating
pressing inon allsides
I feel like I'll never be free
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MnMnMsrcool
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2005-11-05 00:30:45]
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Re: Anger, Blood, Tears
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:58:02 AM AEST
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hey,
have you ever had a panic attack?
not a sissy little ***** thing that they portray on TV i mean a panic attack
because that really captures the mood
very good
very very good
damn me and my abiltity too recall the bad emotions
gotta luv that write though
till next time
emz |
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Re: Anger, Blood, Tears
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by memories_mist on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 02:29:46 AM AEST
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| Nicely put you captured this well. I can relate to this, I had one of those angry moments earlier. Ty for sharing with us. |
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Re: Anger, Blood, Tears
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by PoisonousPyscho on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:36:40 PM AEST
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Love it, it is so well put together too =]
Love Always,
Rene |
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