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The Acid Rain Is Falling
Contributed by
sewntogether
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Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My field of flowers are decaying
Time doesnt matter anymore
Just lying inside of myself
Watching my life being destroyed before my eyes
Not caring anymore
Feeling so emotionless
Stuck in a dark world
And no light to lead me back to reality
The acid rain destroying by already broken soul
But soon the pain will cease
And never come back
For I have fallen
And to weak to get back up
Copyright ©
sewntogether
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2005-11-04 23:25:50]
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Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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hey,
good
f'ing good write
god scary
good
i no how it feels but i cant say ive ever been to weak to get up
yet
till next time
emz |
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Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:43:27 AM AEST
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I thought the last line was a bit weak, but
other than that I thought it was a strong write
and quite well written. I can relate to these
feelings all to well and just so you know the
sun will one day poke through the clouds and
a rainbow will appear... sounds corny, but its
the truth. Keep up the writing you have talent.
BObo (Joel) |
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Re: The Acid Rain Is Falling
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by DreamPoetess on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:05:04 PM AEST
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| I hope this is only a poem, this is soooo sad:> |
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