|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
~*~♥Wash♥~*~
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 05:12:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
|
Wash my bloody hands clean,
Wash The dirt off of me.
I killed a man:
Ripped him apart
Killed a mand:
Tore out his heart
Crying down here on the ground
Without a soul, without a breath
Not needing anything, not needing silence
It creeps up on me willingly
Devouring my SCREAMS!
Wash my bloody wrists
Wash away the pain
I killed myself:
Cut all up
Killed myself:
Watching the blood drops
Dead till I am lost and found,
Not here, not anywhere.
I fear myself.
Despite my empty loneliness
you stab at me again.
Wash away my broken dreams
Wash away the empty part of me.
I killed the always longingness:
I cut it out of me
I killed to anger inside:
I let the blood run free...
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
... [
2005-11-04 17:12:55] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ~*~♥Wash♥~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Evening_Star on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:33:06 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Its dark and pshycotic I love it.
liz |
|
|
Re: ~*~♥Wash♥~*~
(User Rating: 1 ) by sride686 on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 07:30:15 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow it was really good and well done I almost
didn’t read and I’m glad I did. It had such a
dark side to it but was really poetic and flows
really well. So much pain and death that it chills
to the bone. Very well done and it really makes
the reader feel what’s in the words and the
emotion behind them. Take care and keep up the
writes….Steve
|
|
|
|