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The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I pass my time with thoughts of you while living for the dream,
Still hoping for the instant when to you I have been seen,
Engraving moments on my heart each time that you’re around,
While knowing that we’ll never be, to you my soul is bound.
I hunger for a love denied, that no other can sustain,
All the while enduring hell through this self inflicted pain,
This game of love’s an awful curse and something I can’t win,
‘Cause the saddest thing that never was, is a love that’s never been.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:51:24 AM AEST
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Secret Love or Love Denied....wow i cant decide....but either way i spose your right the pain is the same....wow....that's beautiful the way you wrote that out....very deep and full of mystery....thanks for sharing this one Doug i enjoyed it.....
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:47:02 PM AEST
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I find this exsquisitely beautiful writing and look forward to reading more of yours
Chrissie |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:03:35 PM AEST
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HI WORD POET,
THIS IS A VERY GOOD WRITE,LOVE IS A GOOD THING.RICHARD CAMPBELL |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by Lia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:37:02 PM AEST
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| an incredible truth this holds...beautiful |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:00:07 AM AEST
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| This is a very mysterious write. It's beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by sunflower on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:59:49 PM AEST
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this hits hard, like an arrow through the heart
enjoyed but felt the pain of it |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:28:23 PM AEST
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| this poem was by far the most touchinga heartfelt poem that i have read so far!!! i cannot tell whether it was love denied or secret love but it matters not because it's the way that you feel!!! this poem was amazing and extraordinary this poemis one of my favorite poems and i recomend that oyu make up more poems like this one! you really do have a talent so don't stop writting poemsand write with oyur heart!!! and never stop! |
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by karoody on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 10:44:29 AM AEST
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this is a really beutiful poem. sad that someone can put so much devotion in, and get nothing back.
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Re: The Saddest Thing That Never Was...
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:24:21 PM AEST
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You know Doug,the saddest thing is never having loved at all...But I know what you mean....This poem was quite easy to relate to since this period in my life is exactly as described.And I thank you for sharing this with us,it's always nice to have someone describe feelings that we sometimes just can't.You have an immense talent,making each verse so vivid with emotions,kudos to you on such great writes,
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