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Sandy Beaches
Contributed by
enigma
on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:00:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Sandy Beaches
Sandy beaches,
washed by the tide,
a place I trust
my thoughts to confide.
I scribble a name
in the moist sandy shore,
and wait for the tide
my thoughts to store.
Only the seagulls,
and silent starfish,
know of my ventures,
know of my wish...
one little wish,
I pray will come true,
'neathe the sandy shores
of tomorrow.
rko
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enigma
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2005-11-04 11:00:29]
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Re: Sandy Beaches
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by Dri on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:41:15 PM AEST
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| this is so light and simple... emotional without that brand of teen angst we tend to slip into when writing this kind of stuff... this is beautiful. |
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Re: Sandy Beaches
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by ever1der on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:38:34 PM AEST
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| I have a pic in my mind now of a finger scribbling in the sand .. and the tide coming in.. and someone just watching with a smile as the secret goes into the sea..this was great!!!!!! |
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Re: Sandy Beaches
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by poisonpen00ad on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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Wow, such an enjoyable poem. The images you create are outstanding. Well done.
C. |
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