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Temptation
Contributed by
somedaylove
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Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:44:47 AM in AEST
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It was how it all start
In the garden of Eden
One red apple set it all in motion
They could resist, it beg to be eaten
Whether it’s a dictator
Wanting foreign lands
Or a child taking a toy
From another hands
Seeing a lady
In a beautiful dress
Even wanting to clean
Someone else’s mess
Thief’s do it because
They want what you got
In every day life
It happens a lot
Temptation is an emotion
That we have everyday
We must I’ll try to fight it
Or some how you will pay
Copyright ©
somedaylove
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2005-11-04 00:44:47]
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Re: Temptation
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by SeanMcHaney on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:55:48 AM AEST
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| hmm...so true and so well put! |
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Re: Temptation
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:09:25 AM AEST
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Ah yes temptation. Such a dangerous thing. Can get you in to alot of trouble it can. A very well written poem true in every form.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Temptation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:45:48 AM AEST
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| Temptation, aw! the devil's toy |
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Re: Temptation
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 09:26:31 AM AEST
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True down to the core... but, it comes in ways we do not see..
some put too many expectations of others that leads to temptation.
People get sucked into a world without seeing the evil that comes with it. but, who is the one that pays?
very good write ty for sharing this
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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