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sorry for all the trouble

Contributed by coolbreeze17 on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:23:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i've asked so much from you
you where there when
my life was on the line
when all i wanted to do was die
you stood to the side of me and wouldnt let me sigh
when drugs became to great
you became greater
you proved to me that the love from you
is better than any high
when i decided to take the law into my own hands
you helped me put it back
right where i found it
with every lie, curse word ,broken promise, from me
came you, with a smile, a little shake to the head and a hug.
promiseing me that you would never leave me alone
never letting me fall into my own depression
that drugs would never take me away from you
and the law can never have me,
without you i dont know what i'd be
but i know where i'd be six feet deep
I've asked so much from you
so to know suprise to you
im asking for one last thing
that you forever remember me
because i will always remember you

Copyright © coolbreeze17 ... [ 2005-11-04 00:23:33]
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Re: sorry for all the trouble (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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So sad and pretty

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