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No one told me
Contributed by
SeanMcHaney
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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No one told me I was going to die today,
I turn my face down from the sky.
I didn't think it would happen this way,
I couldn't even tell you goodbye.
Rain falls upon me where I lay,
Tears dropped from way up high,
I didn't think it would happen this way,
I couldn't even tell you goodbye.
Now there is nothing left for me to say,
I am so sorry I made you cry,
I didn't think it would happen this way,
I couldn't even tell you goodbye.
I never thought I'd leave this way,
I let out one last sigh,
I didn't think it would end this way,
I wanted to tell you goodbye.
No one told me I would die today,
I didn't know that I would die,
I would have lived life a different way,
I would have said goodbye.
Copyright ©
SeanMcHaney
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2005-11-03 22:56:22]
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Re: No one told me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:48:41 PM AEST
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MAN! WHat is with you always brining me down?
At least it was good, I'd hate to have bee broughtdown by a bad poem! |
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Re: No one told me
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by poisonpen00ad on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:12:29 AM AEST
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Beautifuly sad. Great work.
C. |
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Re: No one told me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:03:40 AM AEST
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WoW this is sensational. You should always tell a person how you feel/say goodbye/that you love them because you never know it could be the last time that you ever see them. Well done on producing such an outstanding write.
*hugs*'
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Re: No one told me
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by ever1der on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:09:50 PM AEST
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| This was a grabber .. the end is striking. |
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