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Motionless
Contributed by
memories_mist
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:15:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Something died inside me the day you left,
a deep dark hole remains,bottomless pit.
Tho' I had time to prepare for our separation,
my heart fell under lock 'n' key.
Words can never express what you meant to me,
a huge space you keep in my heart.
Once flowed happiness,
now all is dark and still.
Where you are now,
I may never get to be.
Your New journey began,
the day you left me.
If tears were money,
I would b rich.
I'd buy back time,
until we were together again.
One last goodbye is what I need from you,
my gramma, my friend.
Copyright ©
memories_mist
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2005-11-03 22:15:34]
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Re: Motionless
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:42:25 PM AEST
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| so beautiful. So so beautiful! Goodbye is such a terribly sweet word... |
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Re: Motionless
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by enigma on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:07:31 AM AEST
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...I was surprised with the ending...expected the loss of a lover...losing figures of stature, significance, security, warmth and love...even if it isn't a romantic loss, it is a significant loss...
...funny, though...I was relieved when I found it wasn't the loss of a spouse, significant other, romantic interest...not sure what that means...
...I hope the memory of her will help to heal your sorrow and loss...
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Re: Motionless
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by JenJen on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 05:40:53 AM AEST
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Wow such a beautiful poem...didnt think it would end like it did. So sorry for your loss
Luv
Jenni
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