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Searching one and searching all
Contributed by
brew
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:11:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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On a cold, dark night
A shiver tingles down the spine
Feeling lost, and not to be found
What and how do I find?
Where is it all?
Maybe the answer, lies when LOVE is found..
Love, the meaning of all to complete ones life
To make, and take
Do we all find it.?
And when we do, what if we cant have
Do we still try...
Do we give in....
I haven't an answer
Its just to complicated; yet simple
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-11-03 22:11:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST (User
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It is hard to have a searching heart. So many questions in the world, so few answers. Just know that there ARE answers, and there is a reason to all that happens, just sometimes we have to stop searching and wait in the quitness of our hearts. |
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST (User
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You might not find all the answers you seek even when you do find love Dayna.
Take things as they come my dear friend.
Another awesome write by a very special Miss. Well done Dayna.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:43:47 AM AEST (User
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this is so sad and yet beautiful in it's innocence, a very heartfelt and lovely write brew . . .
Ben |
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:28:25 PM AEST (User
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This is a very insightful write from you Dayna...It's identifiably introspective, and thought-provoking. Your emotions are mixed in this piece, but sadness is evident. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this post from you.
Scorp.
(Understanding the last two lines only too well...) |
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:30:29 PM AEST (User
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YOU know how much I relate to this right now
dear brew! Wonderfully portrayed on this page.
Yep. I get it. I SO get it.
Great write sweetie.
~Breezy |
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 03:02:20 AM AEST (User
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I simply adhore this poem.. Thought provoking, sad, imagery, beautiful, style.
"Do we still try..." I say yes, just keep trying.
Take care, Dayna. A very brilliant write.
Tim
:-)
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Re: Searching one and searching all
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 02:57:11 PM AEST (User
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Blessed is the one who finds true love. Hang on to it. For those who never gets the chance to find true love with another human being, seek the Lord, He will give you an abundance of it.. Raquel Leah :D wonderful poem, nice questions.. some take more than make.. |
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