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checkmate... (alas...)
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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love is a game
and im just a pawn
soon to be eaten
by the king and his spawn
his queen attacks me
and says she doesnt
i hate to admit it
at least i shouldnt
a royal arena
to battle the ones
that i feel should love me
like im one of their sons
it sickens me now
to think of it all
it makes me question if
i thought to fall
(in love that is...)
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2005-11-03 21:11:30]
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Re: checkmate... (alas...)
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:14:29 PM AEST
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This is awesome and deep.
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Re: checkmate... (alas...)
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by russ-dawg on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 08:43:21 PM AEST
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at first i did not get it but then i read it again with my blaring Music of and i got now i like i admit some of your others are better but this ones good too! good job!
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