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for you
Contributed by
nannerz
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:07:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You see me cry
thinking its for
You see theses scars
on my wrists
thinking there for you
You think you broke my heart
but you cant brake something
thats never been whole
You think you played me
for a fool
but see you are the fool
You thought
we were in love
I couldnt love anyone
see I was bored
and I needed to be amused
You see I never love
my heart
has forzen over
To many heart aches
and let downs
have made me this way
But if it makes you feel better
keep thinking
You broke me
Copyright ©
nannerz
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2005-11-03 20:07:33]
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Re: for you
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by Adrianna on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:36:23 PM AEST
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| Your poem is odd in some way, but definetly in a good way. Your style is superb and love the feeling and emotion you put into it. |
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Re: for you
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:12:46 PM AEST
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This is a very deep awesome poem.
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Re: for you
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by crazy on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:28:20 PM AEST
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hloy crap that almost to a needle point what i told my xbf
kool we both disspize someone that was for fun
yah i feel you when you said that it was for amusment ha ha ha thats so wat i did
kool poem so hateful
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