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Trails
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 07:13:08 PM in AEST
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Familiar is the road
Traveled as such.
To leave a trail
Go for the unknown.
~~ Nats ~~
Copyright ©
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-11-03 19:13:08]
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Re: Trails
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 07:29:27 PM AEST
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| it's not what I thought or think of as haiku .. maybe a senyru? But whatever form it is .. it's good. |
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Re: Trails
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:41:25 PM AEST
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| This is nice but it needs to have like 5/7/5 syllables and needs to be like 3 lines but nice try but it's still good though. |
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Re: Trails
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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Hmmm....I have posted it under Haiku as it seemed most fit there.....This isnt really a poem to fit anywhere else....thats why I posted it under Haiku.
If anyone can direct me to the correct subject....its most welcome.
Nats. |
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Re: Trails
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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this is amazingly relatable 4 me any way, i like it especially the second part, nice going nat tottaly unique and profoundly you . . .
Ben |
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Re: Trails
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:55:18 AM AEST
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IMHO it seems fine to me, Nats. I nice little sentiment that people can relate to. What rule is there that you are always required to follow a rule? Also, as an FYI, you don't have to select a topic. Just let it post and it will post under "oops, no topic". You did good, Nats. Keep up the good work.
Tim
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Re: Trails
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:22:56 PM AEST
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The only rule I would ask anyone to follow is.............be yourself.
If you can do that then your work will continue to shine.Well done
Steve |
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