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It Begins
Contributed by
fredsmith
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:51:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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It Begins
One day,
It will begin.
What can I say,
This is my sin.
The unholy one,
Blessed with fire.
Thinking pain was fun,
He was a liar.
Can’t anyone see,
You’ve been deceived.
Suicide isn’t the key,
I wasn’t relieved.
Sent to hell,
I have done wrong.
The kingdom fell,
No longer I am strong.
My death was only fate,
All was meant to die.
I have opened a gate,
For heaven is only a lie.
This is now the end,
Bleed out my sorrow.
Nothing left to defend,
There is no tomorrow.
By Fred Smith
Copyright ©
fredsmith
... [
2005-11-03 17:51:11]
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Re: It Begins
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by Poetic_Influence on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 06:35:34 PM AEST
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| There is a heaven, so please dont think thier isnt |
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Re: It Begins
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by DamentedSuicide on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:47:20 PM AEST
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| wow wonderfull poem i loved it chilling but awesome |
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Re: It Begins
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by sride686 on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:04:06 AM AEST
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Damn this was a good write no matter what you
believe it was very well done. I believe there is a
heaven but that’s me. This write did give chills
and it flowed real nice and it has a great last
stanza. I enjoyed this write take care and keep
up the writes….Steve
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Re: It Begins
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by HatchetGirl on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 12:28:21 PM AEST
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| Don't listen to them there is no heaven.... and reallity is the only hell... I like this poem. It is a very good description of thoughts and feelings! |
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