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Waiting
Contributed by
Evening_Star
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:41:05 PM in AEST
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Sitting here
Devotedly waiting for your company
In which I seem so without days
How I miss your body lying next to mine
To hear your voice whisper in my ear
To have my hand in yours
Anxiously awaiting for your swift return
Hoping you return safely to back into my arms
But some days I fear it will come to late
To my loving husband, Jesse, whom I love with all my heart
And will be with me till the end of my days
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Evening_Star
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2005-11-03 17:41:05]
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Re: Waiting
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by Poetic_Influence on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 06:40:58 PM AEST
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| I'd love to see more emotion |
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Re: Waiting
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:19:27 PM AEST
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This is a awesome poem.
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Re: Waiting
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by poisonpen00ad on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:32:06 AM AEST
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This is very good. I think you express a lot of emotion here. Your husband is lucky to have you. I thank you and him both for your sacrifice. I will pray for his safe return to you.
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Re: Waiting
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by Strawberry on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 11:04:51 PM AEST
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| very nice write |
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