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torment of the heart
Contributed by
judasman
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i gently caressed you
followed an imaginary trail
across your body
softly i kissed you
feeling my love for you
burn deep inside
we became as one
giving each other our bodies
i died tonight
stepped into nothingness
left you behind
to grieve and move on
knew it was time
the voices were calling
temptation warmed my soul
i awoke to find
that you were gone
then realised that you
were never ever there
i was alone once again
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judasman
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2005-11-03 17:29:04]
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Re: torment of the heart
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by Poetic_Influence on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:45:47 PM AEST
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| Very nice write |
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Re: torment of the heart
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:52:37 PM AEST
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| this is a good write i like poems that i can relate too |
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Re: torment of the heart
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by Kiwi_chick on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 03:49:07 PM AEST
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| It was beautiful there was only one thing I would have changed.... I would of dropped the ed on caressm but apart from the it was heartfelt and I think so awesome! :) |
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