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Writers PRayer
Contributed by
Poetic_Influence
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:21:18 PM in AEST
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Look at me
I' am not your every day
Look at once and then forget
Poet
I am way more deep than that
Cant you see
Everything I say
Is my life stories silhouette
Yes
I love what I do
Writing is my drug
And I am addicted
Why?
It gives me something to hold onto
And no one can pull the plug
Thats restricted
Indeed
So do not forget me
For I am here to stay
Believe it
See
I am not petty
And wont be lead astray
Poetry is my love and i will not decieve it
Amen
Copyright ©
Poetic_Influence
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Re: Writers PRayer
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:40:24 PM AEST
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That's a good first post. Refreshing choice of subject matter, and written with that spark I find enjoyable. A little punctuation would not be amiss, though.
Keep writing.
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Re: Writers PRayer
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:54:52 PM AEST
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well interesting write nice flow
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Re: Writers PRayer
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:54:53 PM AEST
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well interesting write nice flow
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Re: Writers PRayer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 06:12:57 PM AEST
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I love the rhyme schene in this one, nice first post.
Welcome to the site!!! |
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Re: Writers PRayer
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by inoc on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:19:48 AM AEST
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I hope everything goes well for you
Welcome to YPDC
nice!
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