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Culprit of these Tears
Contributed by
perfectly_flawed
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:02:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You fill every ounce of blood that runs through me,
you are on every puzzle piece that makes my skin.
Every breath I take
gives me hope that by the next one
I'll see you,
the culprit of these tears.
Copyright ©
perfectly_flawed
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2005-11-03 17:02:25]
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Re: Culprit of these Tears
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:09:49 PM AEST
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How sad and heart breaking. I feel pain and sadness through your words. Time heals all wounds. May sorrow be washed from your heart and may love reside in it once more.
*heartfelt hugs for you*
sue |
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Re: Culprit of these Tears
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:18:56 PM AEST
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beautifuly written. it's just beautiful kristy! i'm in awe of your writing. i can relate to how you feel in this poem. once more, praise is all i have here!
~karis~ |
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Re: Culprit of these Tears
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by judasman on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:41:38 PM AEST
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| so few words written but masses spoken. a tale of anguish and heartbreak that has been felt by many. good write |
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Re: Culprit of these Tears
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:45:23 PM AEST
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These few words opened a flood-gate of emotions for me. So few words that speak mountains.
*hugs*
Shannon |
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