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Frozen Broken Reflection
Contributed by
FairyFireFly
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:37:58 PM in AEST
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As I gaze at my frozen broken reflection fighting back the tears of painful abandonment. I close my eyes and mind to try to breath in some warmth for im nearly frozen now. When I open my eyes too take in the cold but deadly air again.I draw a line through my heart with the left over used memories that held my heart in place. Stabbing through the life that was the only one to grasp and hold onto to see it wash away before my eyes.Now Im suffocating im drowning as you all pass not even a ledge to keep me afloat. I bite through all the pain with a last glance in the broken frozeen reflection. Take it away for i have the right in this life wich is to end the fight.Sharpened razors ripped up flesh flesh pills of the key to unlock the end of this horror noval called life.As now im free.
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Re: Frozen Broken Reflection
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:56:28 PM AEST
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A painful and sad write. You can feel so much suffering through your words. I felt alot like this when depression took over my life. Chin up and may your days be alot brighter.
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Re: Frozen Broken Reflection
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by Nerdanel on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:52:15 AM AEST
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