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paper
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I wish my skin
was like paper
A simple touch
and it would tear apart
I could rip it open
with my own hands
watch the blood run
from all my vains
I could rip out my heart
as it still beats
with my
paper skin
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
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2005-11-03 15:35:32]
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Re: paper
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by Evening_Star on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:51:16 PM AEST
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I liked you write. Its got a morbid feel when I read it. It flows nicely.
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Re: paper
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by Hippie on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 09:00:53 AM AEST
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if only it was that easy. good write. i'm a self harmer 2....... if you want to write PM me..... take care........
Hippie
(don't ask about all the flippin dots......... cos i dunno why i'm doing em!)
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Re: paper
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:11:22 PM AEST
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great poem. i like ur style of writting
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