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Fallen

Contributed by russ-dawg on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:28:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

There is a place in the dark were i can hide
you'll be suprised whats on my mind

They call me a freak but thats not me
I'm just a girl who fell to deep

cat out of bag its no secret
i need you but you can't see it

further and further i walk the line
It gets hardder and hardder but im just fine

can you catch me can you catch my fall
I'm falling down off the highest tree tops

God if you hear me I'm trying to change
but the time keeps getting in my way

out in the country i went for a ride
thinking about people to busy lying to swim against the tide

not every one in life live in side a white picket fence
when it gets menchoned poepleget a little tence

doesn't matter where your goiing doesn't where you been
but we are all going some where in the end

can you catch me can you catch my fall
I've fallen so long don't think that I can stop

can you catch me can you catch my fall
I need some one out there to catch my fall

Copyright © russ-dawg ... [ 2005-11-03 14:28:21]
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Re: Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Freak-of-the-Week on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:57:10 PM AEST
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Oh, this is beautiful. This is my favorite thing by you so far. I was really surprised when I read it...not that I'm saying your other stuff is bad, it's just this is pretty special in and of itself. It really kind of stands apart from your work, it feels really complete. It's got a beautiful, easy word choice...Have you put it to music yet? 'Cause if you haven't, you gotta...I'd help, too (I'm so sneaky, cashin' in on your music career...mwahahaha!)... :P

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