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Pain
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Pain, this is pain, this is feeling
Hurt, infinite sadness, death is healing
Where she wants to be is where she is now
Everything hurts but the world can’t pull her down
Black velvet corset and red satin lace
Gleaming eyes and a porcelain face
Chains around her ankles and leather in her hair
Oceans in her eyes that no one ever knew were there
Her soul, this is where the hunger was born
This is it; this is beauty in its highest form
You pinned her mind to the skies, but you don’t understand
This is all she ever wanted, this is all she ever had
Without this, no one knows who she is
Just another clone, another eternal misfit
This is her; this is who she is now
You can’t take it away; you won’t touch her thorned crown
This is real, she is beauty, she is life
Forever winning that battle between the blade and the knife
Numb from it all so it doesn’t hurt
She’s felt the stars on her skin and tasted their dirt
She’s read the stories and walked on the sea
I became her, but she’s everything I’ll never be
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2003-01-22 00:20:00]
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Re: Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:43:43 AM AEST
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Everything hurts but the world can’t pull her down
I loved that line so much it spoke volumes to me. This is a masterpiece I was in awe reading it... this is the best poem I've read of yours. Wow this had so much feeling put into it. I loved this. Wow... I'm in awe.
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Re: Pain
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:48:01 AM AEST
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This is so beautifully written, thank you for sharing this one....it's very dark and i beleive the last lines tell quite a story.....beautiful write...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Pain
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by plous on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:02:09 PM AEST
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| I like it, the imagery to me comes in distorted geometry and time. |
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Re: Pain
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:47:22 PM AEST
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Your writing has such depth and emotion; such vividness and I believe there is hope that I can see between the lines, in this piece. Am I right? Again I thank you for sharing.
rosie |
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Re: Pain
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by whywhy on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 07:52:51 AM AEST
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I loved every single word...this is so beautiful.
It makes me see images...almost close enough to touch them. |
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Re: Pain
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by HeartShapedBox on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 03:50:23 PM AEST
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| Great poem...you have a lot of talent! |
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Re: Pain
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:57:57 AM AEST
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| beautiful,beautiful poetry |
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Re: Pain
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:00:02 PM AEST
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Black velvet corset and red satin lace
Gleaming eyes and a porcelain face
Chains around her ankles and leather in her hair
Oceans in her eyes that no one ever knew were there
i Love this poem... the above line is very personal to me and reflective to my own self... you have written a beautiful piece of poetry... the kind i want to print out on black paper, in red letters, with bleeding roses, and put up on my bathroom mirror... blessings... |
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Re: Pain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:51:07 PM AEST
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Wyrd_faerie, this is an excellent poem.... Great work....
Jenni |
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Re: Pain
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 10:20:45 PM AEST
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simply and breathtakingly beautiful. there are no words that would do justice in describing how outstanding this poem is. you have an amazing talent. you reviewed mine so i had to come read yours. i am oh so glad that i did. words can't describe how exquisite this poem is. it's origanallity and discriptive splendor is just breathtaking. i'd put the lines that i liked best but it would end up being the poem in its entirety. may all your days be filled with light and joy.
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