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A New Story
Contributed by
scotsgirl
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Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:28:18 AM in AEST
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A New Story
It is so hard to step out
From the demons who have a hold
There is so much I doubt
As I sit by myself in the cold
Almost taken from this life
By my own demons
But really it is I with the knife
It is I who is screaming
But cracks from clouds reveal
The sun in all its glory
The feelings it brings are unreal
To this girl who’ll tell a new story
Copyright ©
scotsgirl
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2005-11-03 11:28:18]
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Re: A New Story
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:34:31 AM AEST
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hey bubsy, its great to see that people can actually get out of their depressive states, encourage people who don't feel there is hope. because you and i are living, LIVING proof.
great write
my fav. part was
It is so hard to step out
"From the demons who have a hold
There is so much I doubt
As I sit by myself in the cold "
keep writing
keep posting
your friend
katie kakes
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Re: A New Story
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by Lessa on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:52:12 PM AEST
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i have writtin similer stuff for the same reson, its good to see other people do it too.
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Re: A New Story
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by Adrianna on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:34:36 PM AEST
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| I love the feeling and emotion of your poem. It is very good. |
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Re: A New Story
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:45:36 PM AEST
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This is really awesome, I can relate to it a lot.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: A New Story
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:12:50 PM AEST
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May you go on feeling the warm rays of the sun each day of your life.
Thanks for sharing
Steve |
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