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Mother Child
Contributed by
enigma
on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 09:29:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Mother, Child
Oh,
for a tear,
for a whimper;
none came...
Oh,
for a twitch,
a breath;
there was none...
Just for a sigh,
a movement,
Oh!
God!
Please!
Anything,
anything...
Please,
God!
anything...
Tears fall hard for one:
alone,
weeping,
without.
Within a looming metropolis
she bleeds alone.
The child's body
lies limp, cool and still,
but,
her memory burns,
within a mother's heart.
rko
Copyright ©
enigma
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2005-11-03 09:29:56]
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Re: Mother Child
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:14:56 AM AEST
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| varry tuching. this is a true night mare. |
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Re: Mother Child
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by Evening_Star on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:16:33 PM AEST
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I agree with Moon_light its very touching a true nightmare. Being a mother hoping that no parent should go through the death of a child but sadly the world it doesn't work that way.
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Re: Mother Child
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:33:29 PM AEST
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Well with me being a mom of three this touched me in so many ways,how sad it was!
Great write ! Christina |
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Re: Mother Child
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:46:33 PM AEST
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A sad, emotional and heart breaking write. You brought tears to my eyes with this poem of yours. As a parent myself I don't wish this sort of pain on anybody not even my worst enemy. Thanks for sharing this write with us.
*heartfelt hugs*
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Re: Mother Child
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 10:37:56 AM AEST
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it very sad but good at least ur poems ryme
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