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Premonitions
Contributed by
Without_Hope
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:35:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Eyes fall on a tired page,
As smoke drifts off burning sage.
Red drops sly liers oil,
The calms anger will boil.
Hearts broken, tears fall,
The gental giant not so tall.
Bullets burst through air,
To many die, not good, not fair.
Gone too soon, the story tells,
Broken by time, the clocks bells.
Down the dark tunnel, step by step,
Muscles burning, just one more rep.
The stallion pounds down the hall,
Skirts fly, the Unseelie Court.
The seelie court, bleeding tears,
Whipped by overwhelming fears.
The shot rings, true and true,
Words ring wrong, thru and thru.
Copyright ©
Without_Hope
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2005-11-02 22:35:15]
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Re: Premonitions
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by brew on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:38:50 PM AEST
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Deep.......
Written with such emotions, with the soul.
Feels saddness, and lost with what was penned.!
Hope the feeling goes away....
There can always be hope.......Let the eyes, see for that. Good write.
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Re: Premonitions
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:27:03 PM AEST
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Very nice write... u captured it perfectly
GODBLESS
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Re: Premonitions
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 12:48:33 AM AEST
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| I like this one very well done! |
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Re: Premonitions
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by zalzool on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:10:36 AM AEST
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Good write
liked it
it was sad
but pretty good :) ..
keep it up
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