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Rusting
Contributed by
senorwoohoo
on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
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Each word like a bullet,
tearing through my heart.
Each fight like a battle,
how did this all start?
Shunned by society,
its hypocritical ways.
So I'm stuck in my room alone,
for days upon days.
Listening to the same song
to relate the pain.
Even though its light outside,
all I see is rain.
I try so hard,
to be strong like I must.
But I keep my head down,
as my soul starts to rust.
Copyright ©
senorwoohoo
... [
2003-01-21 23:00:00]
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Re: Rusting
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:28:57 PM AEST
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can hear the sadness and pain...an excellent write
rosie |
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Re: Rusting
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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| ...and I can hear the screams. Very well written. Chrissie |
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Re: Rusting
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 08:14:30 PM AEST
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| i agree with chrissie.. those silent screams are quite loud.. excellent write my friend.. hugs nessa |
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